Painful

• Artist: xCookieGirl
• Description: Please comment on whatcha think :)
• Date: 06/08/2011
• Tags: pain

If pain was a color, what color would it be?
Blue as the tear dribbling down your face,
Red as the blood dripping from your wounded heart,
green as the grassgrowing on the grave,
yellow as the flame burning the proof,
brown as the dirt that seperates you from Hell,
black as the nothingness you escape to when you close your eyes,
what color would it be?

Comments

[Arthuritis592]

I really enjoyed reading this, I think if you keep at it you could be an amazing poet. Try going to a poetry reading, if you live in/near a city, they have them going all the time. I was lucky enough that my school hosted them for authors from around the state. Hearing other's writing helps make your own better. 5 for you

[Devious Alyss 15]

My dear, you have take the words from my mouth and put them into a poem. You a great poet and don't ever stop.