always you and i

• Artist: OhhTim
• Description: i was inspired by this song and i took some words and put it into a poem c:
• Date: 05/14/2011
• Tags: always

you and i together it just feels so right
i usually smile at times when i, have you upon my mind
you and i together and the mornings sunrise..
though you gotta say goodbye
don't you worry boy, its always you and i

Comments

[Night Dreamer Mystery]

Aww, how simple and sweet. I think you did a good job of capturing a complete message (of love) into just a few lines. I wasn't crazy about the way it's punctuated, seems like there should be pauses in places where there aren't.. but aside from that, nice job!