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why do i watch as he starts again
starts a cycle without end
another heart will be broken
new heartbreak awoken
he speaks to me
my heart leaps with glee
yet i know it cannot be
him and me
he says i love you
but i know its not true
he says he needs me,
that he'll never leave me
but i can see he doesnt mean it
i was to blind to see it
one day it was perfect and he was with me
the next he was gone and my heart began to bleed
i loved him wth all my heart
and now my world has fallen apart
an empty room
a broken heart
a whisper in the dark
"i love you,dear. its sad we're apart"
a loaded gun
a message written
one last good bye and the gun goes off
a bloody tear runs down a stark white cheeck
a last thought runs through the mind
"he will never be mine"
- by xXHazmattazXx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/21/2011 |
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- Title: suicidal love
- Artist: xXHazmattazXx
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Description:
this poem came to me when my bf that i loved with all my heart broke up with me.
i still love him though.......... - Date: 04/21/2011
- Tags: suicidal love
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Morbid Humour - 04/24/2011
- Very impressive. You have some very clever rhyming schemes. One suggestion though is that while reading it, a few grammar, spelling and formatting errors caught my eye and distracted my from the meaning of your words. Still, it is a beautiful written work. 4/5. wink
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- Princess Jackiegirl - 04/22/2011
- Oh, wow...that's sad. Dear, feel better, okay? It's a good poem. smile
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