alone

• Artist: MoVEsLIkEJaGGer 8D
• Description: somone alone on a hill.
• Date: 04/18/2011
• Tags: alone

I am alone standing here upon this hill waiting for somone to care. You left me here to look upon the lonley city streets alone. No one to hold me, no one to care for, no. the only thing beside me is the ghost of dispare.

Comments

[Blush 4 me]

Insert some line breaks, beef it up with more "show not tell", mix well and you might have a good poem here.