Clueless

• Artist: cuts-and-scars
• Description: A poem about a guy who acts like he likes me, but has a girlfriend. Confusing. Haven't posted in a while, hoping I still have the poet in me. Feedback would be great, criticising or apraising.
• Date: 02/19/2011
• Tags: clueless poetry love heartbreak

It’s early morning
And I still can’t sleep
Thoughts of you
Stirring feelings, hidden deep

The rain outside my window
Creates a steady beat
That matches the sound of my heart
As I try to forget the heat

The sparks that flew
Can’t create the flame
It’s not your fault
I’m the one to blame

I realize I have no idea
What to do
Since you don’t need me
The way I need you.

Comments

[The Rogue Butler]

The real question is... do you like him? In fairness, he's probably trying to get you jealous? Maybe thats just me, but in fairness it seems like that... If that's not the case, then do not let him into your heart. He'll only hurt you if he's doin' this with his current relationship status
Anyways, great poem, I do believe the last bit could be stretched out a little bit... but all in all, it was quite a good read