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Some say I`m beautiful,As if I were a princess
You can look closely,But please dont obsess.
Some say I`m modest,But I try not to boast
Seldom it is I who loves, Unlike most.
Those who give themselves away to quickly,Find hardship to fast
I am not ashamed,I love at last.
From Romeo to Juliet,To the beat of my heart
Not even death,could pry us apart.
Life passes so quickly,As if it were all a dream
Or like crisp cold water,travelling down a stream.
So clear it is, So slow it will flow
Dear Cupid just watches,in his hand a bow.
Apparently I was shot with it, So close to the a**
Suddenly I fell, Landing roughly in the grass.
Looking into nothing, My pale blue-green eyes would gaze
Lost from the thought of nothing, As I guiging through a maze.
Quickly I drew, So fast to my feet
Now feeling the sensation,My heat,How quickly it beats.
Yet Cupid never hit me, It was only you
You were the silver sword I quickly drew.
Slashing my way, Through every last thing
Now around me, Hovers a silver ring.
So beautiful it is, Yet so quickly it goes
Keep close watch, Because nobody knows.
Until he quickly draws, And soon you`re hit
Only to be left wondering. What is it?
- by XxUnleashedHeathenxX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/06/2011 |
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Comments (2 Comments)
- XxUnleashedHeathenxX - 02/09/2011
- Thank you for correcting me. You are the first to see my work along with others,but I don`t understand what you mean by polished. Can you please explain.
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- sailortrance - 02/08/2011
- I do like the thought behind this. I think it's a good effort, and well written... except- there are a few spelling errors, and one or two times where you used the wrong "to"(to, too, and two) these are little things, but I will say that if you wish for your writing to be taken seriously, it's better to sound more polished, rather than less. I think you have talent though, and I look forward to reading more of your work. : )
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