Untitled Sonnet

• Artist: Cassadee-chan
• Description: Something else I had to do for English class. Please comment and rate!
• Date: 02/04/2011
• Tags: untitled sonnet

Enraged today and left alone to die
I cannot picture plastic smiles upon my face
Awake at Night and my tears left to dry
Happy memories and malice fall with grace

Allow these beautiful roses to wither
My appetite for peace begins today
His lovely eyes made me go into a dither
realizing he would never love me made life cliche

Heartless and cold, he killed my soul
Leaving my body alone and dead, he did
Left my heart craving something to fill this hole
Maybe it’s me for loving a heartless kid

Soulless people should not pretend to care
Or maybe I learned not to love anymore; it’s not fair

Comments

[Le Cooch]

LOVES!
5/5

[Kittycquariana]

Your sonnet was quite good, but some of the rhymes seem a bit forced, cliché rhyming with day being the most prominent example. 4/5

[GhostGem]

i love it1 <3 5/5

[Cassadee-chan]

Oh my, that'd be so amazing. I'd love you forever~ ♥

[EshaEsha]

amazing ;x omg i remember the some weird events of my first semester in college X____x omg i can totally relate this ...

amazing amazing <3
ps: if you don't mind ill try creating a song outta this xP ill send you a youtube link if am successful