Soul Eater (Villanelle)

• Artist: Umi Kitsuna
• Description: Those of you who write poetry should know what a Villanelle is. But for those who do not it is a scripted poem that must go in a certain pattern.
  A1 lines are the same
  A2 lines are the same
  a rhymes with a, and
  b rhymes with b
  Pattern:
  A1 b A2 ab A1 ab A2 ab A1 ab A2 ab A1 A2
  PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS THAT CRITICIZES THE WORK!!
  I don't like when people say good job or bad job...explain...
• Date: 01/29/2011
• Tags: soul eater

Forever Alone,
The warm word went cold,
Where the light never goes,
Shadows cover all around.
A lost story that won't unfold,
Forever Alone.
A fable, this young boy found,
About a little girl who grew so old,
Where the light never goes.
She lived in a house below the ground,
He went in feeling so bold.
Forever Alone,
Unable to escape the horror he found,
When she ate his soul till he went cold.
Where the light never goes,
Below the house deep in the ground,
Eating our souls till the whole world grows old.
Forever Alone,
Where the light never goes.