Dust to Dust

• Artist: Crimson Rebel Ghost
• Description: Comment and rate please and thank you.
• Date: 01/19/2011
• Tags: dust dark dramatic gothic night

Underground sound makes my heart beat loud,
Leave this world in ashes where only the dead are proud,
A click triggers a boom triggers your blood across this room.
You don't understand how close you stand to something you should fear,
So run boy run straight away from the gloom,
but you never realize your runnin' straight for your doom.
Dust to dust to crushed to blush on the face of the rush,
Time goes slow when your eyes are all but seared
with an image so red that it makes everything clear.

Comments

[I Birdy I]

Amazing crummeh 100/5. I see its rap too! Its really good and it flows, Its awsome!

[Arbiter of the Light]

I sat here and rapped this, it flows so well. 4/5 Structure it a little better next time, though. Allot of people like reading spaced lines rather than a block of text, if you know what I mean.