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Why
Is it so cold?
My breath
Is a cloud
On the icy air
Before me.
My hands
Are blue
Like bellflowers.
My body
Shivers
Like grass
Under the wind.
All around me
Snow
Is falling
Slowly
And landing
Delicately
On the ground
That is already
White.
A snowfield
Is in front
Of me.
An empty wasteland
Barren
And cold.
I am alone
Even when
I am surrounded
By people
I am in
Solitude.
I am
In a shield
A bubble
That no one
Can pierce.
I can
No longer cry.
For
If I do
The tears
Would freeze
To my skin.
Like the ones
I cried
As I fell
Into the snow.
My feet
Are broken.
My azure hands
Are broken
As well.
And my soul
Which has fought
Alongside my heart
To survive
Has finally shattered.
Please
Let me die
In this snowfield.
I can no longer walk
Or talk
Or move.
I have
No purpose
In life.
He struck me down
In this snowfield
With the sword
That belonged to me.
Even though
I tried
To fight back.
He is the one
Who killed
My family
My friends
And yet
Why couldn’t I
Cut him
Once?
My sister
Warned me
That he was
Too strong
To take down.
But I
Did not listen.
My throat
Burns
As blood
Comes up
Again.
My hair
Long and black
Is matted
With blood.
I cough
Again
And my eyes
Begin to close.
I cannot win.
I am already dead.
The coldness
Around me
Burns
In my wounds.
But that
No longer matters.
Soon
I will join
My mother
My father
And the rest of my kin
Who have passed
Before me.
Forgive me
Sister.
For I was
Too weak
To kill him.
- Title: Weakness
- Artist: Cylyscha
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Description:
It's a short story in poetry form. It's kind of a fantasy, taking place during the year 207 to 208 BCE. It's about a girl who tried her hardest to kill the man who murdered her family and friends, but ultimately fails and dies in a field of snow. The idea came from a picture I have, but I don't know if I can upload it.... it's on my profile...
i would like constructive criticism, please. No flamers allowed. - Date: 11/28/2010
- Tags: weakness death snow cold blood
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Comments (1 Comments)
- luvd_n_forgotten - 11/29/2010
- i loveee it <3 alot. I actually am very jealous of how yu do yur verses like that! I could never, it wouldnt seem right for meh. Congrats : D Hopefully yu can upload the pic soon smile
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