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I´m dead
that is the end.
It´s time to say goodbye,
for me don´t cry.
Remember our good times
is not a crime.
Now, i´m in the dark
you are not scare.
It´s my time to pay
you aren´t alone stay.
I´m not a man.
I cann´t born again.
I want to
stay whit you.
Plesa don´t laeve me.
I like been
your star
in your war
whit your heart
and don´t stay far.........
- by hitomy kansaky |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/03/2010 |
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- Title: a realy love
- Artist: hitomy kansaky
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- Date: 10/03/2010
- Tags: realy love
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- ChelseasDeadSmile - 09/26/2018
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This has many grammatical errors on top of spelling errors. The flow is interrupted by both of these errors so please revise it.
2/5 Needs some major revision to help get this going. - Report As Spam