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once upon a time
a boy
and a girl
meet and fall in love
that's how most fairy stories go, right?
but how come they never mention
the worrying
and the waiting
and the wondering
as you lie awake in bed
chasing around your head the thought --
the hope --
the wild chance --
that they might maybe
-- just maybe
love you back...
maybe the writers of the fairy stories
left that out
because they thought it would be boring
but I think that it's boring
-- and unrealistic
without it
and yes, I know it's called a fairy story
but still...
- by Echowindsong |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/19/2010 |
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- Title: ramblings 1
- Artist: Echowindsong
- Description: Ramblings on Romance and Fairy Stories. PLEASE NO FLAME but constructive criticism is encouraged.
- Date: 08/19/2010
- Tags: ramblings romance fairy story
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- Chamomile Dream - 08/25/2010
- It's good, but a little cliché. You're obviously a good poet, but maybe try a less popular topic.
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