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flame licks my skin but i feel no pain
darkness comes and blinds me
i take comfort in the darkness
i hear music
sweet and slow piano music fills the air
the music becomes faster and less sweet
i cover my ears...i want the music to stop
"BRING BACK THE SLOW AND SWEET!" i scream
the music changes
a new song
as it plays it gets eary...
i see a man in a black robe
he walks toward me
i welcome him...knowing he is death...
he streatches out his boney hand and i take it
he leads be to a strange place
it is a field of lillies of the valley...but they are all dead
i cry over the loss of the beautiful flowers
the music changes yet again
now it is sweet again
i look around and notice the lillies of the valley changing
they are growing and becoming alive again
i look back at death...
but instead of the man in black i see a handsom blond boy
he smiles at me and pulls me close to him
we start to dance
i rest my head on his chest
as we dance he lifts my head to kiss me
as my lips meet his...i know something is wrong
when i look again i see the boy melting away
he turns into death once more
i beg death to bring back the boy but he wont
the music becomes fast and scarey
i try to run but he holds onto me tightly
he pulls out a dagar
i scream as he plunges it through my heart...
and with my last breath...i die
the end
- by kimiko6107 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/31/2010 |
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- Title: the music
- Artist: kimiko6107
- Description: idk why i wrote this...i just did
- Date: 07/31/2010
- Tags: music love sweet death
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Yureiaa Hearts - 08/04/2010
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Find a way around "blunt" images. This is intended to be a poem, and should use more poetic strategies.
Also, spell check before you post a final.
Lastly, in poetry, there is no need for "The End" as a conclusion. The final line is supposed to keep a person still with thought, not with forced conclusion. - Report As Spam