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Rain falling
I cry your name in agony
But you just lie there
Tears going down my cheeks
I hold your cold hand and close your eyes
I wait there for help,handeling the gun that killed you
Saying it wasn't my fault
But it was, i had killed you for no reasons
Now i suffer for this faulty mistake
They take me away from you
And when they put me in the car
I smiled, cause now i no that i am what u said i wasn't
I'm a sinner
- by _X Mad Hatress X_ |
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- | Submitted on 07/28/2010 |
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- Title: Sinner
- Artist: _X Mad Hatress X_
- Description: it's just a random poem that i did hope yall like it i would like to no wat u think of it
- Date: 07/28/2010
- Tags: sinner
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- Cloom - 08/07/2010
- I love it!!!!! Give me more! I like your imagaination!!!!!
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- Kechero-TheForsakenRose - 07/28/2010
- *clarity
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- Kechero-TheForsakenRose - 07/28/2010
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It has potential, dear, but it lacks emotion and clerity. Keep on writing. :3 - Report As Spam
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