Wonders

• Artist: death1236
• Description: I wonder if my poem will be good.
• Date: 07/27/2010
• Tags: wonders

Sometimes i wonder if i am to be great,

Oh not many people like my way,
But fortune says my destiney will say,

Not many will lye,
But some will fly,

How high i sore,
Help those in need like the poor,

Wonders of my destiney,
Will help my hours ahead,

But all i can do is listen to what i have said.

Comments

[ferbreez_ninja]

Quite good, full of feeling. You have some spelling errors and some grammar but the rhyming was quite well done and a little witty :3 great job though 4/5