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I feel so nervous now,
As I’m walking out the door.
And I stare into the deep blue eyes
Of the guy I’ve fallen for.
I give him my best smile,
Hoping I don’t look lame.
Oh now I’m getting worried.
What was I gonna say?
It’s kind of chilly out here,
We’re right outside my house.
And we’ve really got to be
As quiet as a mouse.
But that can’t really change
This rare romantic feeling.
And I think that I might be blushing,
Because I feel like squealing!
This moment just feels too perfect
And so unbelievably right.
But I know that I’m not nervous now,
As he holds me tight.
Comments (2 Comments)
- GiftedPsychosis - 08/30/2010
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Aww, this is really cute smile The rhyming is pretty good. Usually house-mouse really annoys me, but you wove it in nicely with the rest, so I barely even noticed it. I like how it's very realistic, any girl who's ever had a crush on a boy would completely understand. And it flows fairly well, especially for a rhyming piece, which I think is a little harder that free style.
Overall, very good smile - Report As Spam
- SabbsTV - 07/21/2010
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simple yet so descriptive
5/5 smile - Report As Spam