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On a perfect day, the meadows come into light.
Not a single crystal of snow in sight.
Each day comes to the field of gold, always sunny with its might.
Best days come far in this season
Every sunny morning makes it a reason.
At the top, I gaze at its glory
Under my feet, the grass graze, representing the whole story.
Towards it all, the weather is mild
In its fall, the weather is briefly wild.
Fast as it can be, it'll always be sunny.
Until then, a memory of a wild weather can be funny.
Leaves in color and sprouting flowers, I would cuddle to a white bunny.
Seasons so bright
Underneath me, it's more than a beautiful day.
No raindrop or crystal of snow shall get in my way.
Stepping into the soft, green line of sight.
Happiness within the sunlight
In the meadows, flowers bloom even in May
Never again will the sky become gray
Each field of silver and gold will always have its might.
- by Mario the Davidic Hero |
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- | Submitted on 07/14/2010 |
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- Title: One beautiful sunshine
- Artist: Mario the Davidic Hero
- Description: Another decent acrostic in which I came up with, if not the best one out of several of my other poetic pieces. I even did my attempt at making the third acrostic stanza an octave sonnet as well since this piece reflects on the joys of paradise, if not the sunshine alone. PM me for more info and... well, enjoy this one!
- Date: 07/14/2010
- Tags: beautiful sunshine
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Comments (4 Comments)
- EmmyMurphy - 10/29/2010
- awwww, so gorgeous! biggrin
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- Blegh Im A Strudel - 08/28/2010
- The imagery in this whole piece is with out a doubt gorgeous and the way it flows is like velvet off the tongue. I loved reading it and I really admire you as a writer. I wish I could write like this. All of my pieces turn out gloom for some reason. I have one on here it's called 'Humanity is at it's finest' You should read it, and maybe give me some pointers? If you could I mean.. I don't want to trouble you or anything, but it would be nice. ^_^ Thank you so so so much if you do decide.
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- Shamyrie - 07/14/2010
- I love it!!
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- The Blonde Sally - 07/14/2010
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i especially like the last stanza, mario!
keep it up! smile - Report As Spam