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Life is like a game.
You are the game piece.
And fate is the player.
The decisions you make in life can take you two steps forward
Or three steps back.
The last step that you take can only mean one thing
DEATH.
- by Darkmenwar78 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/14/2010 |
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- Title: Life Game
- Artist: Darkmenwar78
- Description: My first piece of work.Not alot to say I guess.
- Date: 07/14/2010
- Tags: life game
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Comments (1 Comments)
- bram toker - 07/21/2010
- This seems to be an interesting concept at first, and the last two lines certainly are true. However, I think you should acknowledge that it is not fat ealone which controls our lives. While some aspects of life are dependant on fate, there are just as many that are dependant on our own choices.
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