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Some may say that life would end in hell some say heaven. but ive tasted desire of hate and love. netheir ends the life your life ends when you choose it to end...You may never get the chance to do something u desire and wished to do while alive but what if u died now how would u die and if no how would you go on with your life?
If u have a desire dont leave it until ur older do it now some thing bad may happen in the future and u still wont be able to do that desire..
If u have death choices thats ur desire but u will cross the lord of going to hell try living doing other desires having fun making friends never let ur guard down and never turn ur back on ur enemy.......
Choose ur decision......{}Life..or..[]Death.
- by Xx1_Sango_1xX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/04/2010 |
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Comments (1 Comments)
- littlewonder2 - 08/20/2010
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Is this poetry? If so, seperate into stanzas (paragraphs) please. Also, don't use text talk in creative writing. It's all part of the creative process, after all.
Criticisms aside, this is good. Quite thoughtful. - Report As Spam