Her Wonderland

• Artist: Airayla
• Description: I guess I wrote this poem becasue I envy Alice's ability to fantasize and then make it a reality. Wish I could do that! I know its not the greatest but Its been a few years so this is my warm up. Hope you like!
• Date: 07/01/2010
• Tags: wonderland alice wish fantasy

I truthfully wish I could be Alice
Falling blindly into a mystic wonderland
Dwell inside a fabulous pearl palace
Finding secret powers to help make a great stand

Bold smiles vanish like a crestent white moon
Mad hattery exposes mad hatter skills
Please don't let the small pocket watch tick noon
A white rabbit who always gets too many thrills

Befriend a smokey blue caterpillar
Sing in choirous with the beautiful wild flowers
Tweddle twin jokes are always such a killer
Mr. Dodo can enchant me for many hours

But then I would be horribly late
Late, for a very important date.

Comments

[Zuhukanah]

Ooh, a sonnet. Not bad smile

[Jizzie Boo]

Not cheezy... Pretty kewl. Someone said it rhymed. A lil', but keep in mind, it don't have to rhyme. smile But it is good and it does go along with the story. Of what I can remember anyway. LOL smile Great job Jan!!!

[topazchoco]

this is great! it matches perfectly with the story, and it
rhymes!! biggrin i love it!