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Flying Solo
Here i am,
there you are.
You walk on,
as if you were a falling star.
Right on by, past my face.
I stand there alone,
in the wet paste.
My life is rotting,
as you continue to ignore my sky.
Will I ever truly fly?
Here i am,
there you are.
Isn't the distance far?
- Title: Flying Solo
- Artist: Rennity
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Description:
Considering my life has been a complete throw away, i tend to right depressing poems every-now-and-then.
Then intention of this poem was to spell-out that love can make depression on an average humans life thanks to love. Although it has it great moments, it also has its bad. - Date: 06/27/2010
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Tiggergirl22 - 07/06/2010
- 4/5 check out some of my stuff??
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- Cookie_Booger - 07/03/2010
- Use "I" instead of "i". And capitalization on each line.
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- tutuChan - 06/27/2010
- exactly
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