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Look-Bite-Look-Bite
Took-Light-Took-Light
Wrong-Right-Wrong-Right!
IMPERIAL GESTURES!- Of fearful perfecture
THE WHORES ARE CONIVING!-Their masters are smiling
THEY'RE SHOVELING HATRED!-On graves of the patrons
DON'T NEED YOUR APPROVAL!-For virus removal
It engulfs you, rapes you, surrounds you!
Drinks your terror as your heart pounds you!
You beat me down but never raised me!
Your harsh words will never phaze me!
(Chrous):
Rip the placenta from the mother
Tear the loins of the lover
Kiss the whore, Break the seal
Try to decipher what is real- FEAR!
INTERPRATE THE LANGUAGE!-Of undying anguish
YOUR GODS OR ALL FALLING!-The cancer is calling
CONSUME ALL THE LIFELESS!-Until you can fight this
JUST CALL ME A b*****d!-My hearts beating faster!
Your compulsions leaving you counting!
These new voices are astounding!
You break down but I breathe still!
I cant describe just how this feels!
(Chorus)
FEAR ME!
FEAR ME!
FEAR ME!!!
(guitar solo)
THE BLOOD IS TORRENTIAL!-The Fear's monumental
YOU MAY BE GOLIATH!-But I wouldnt try it
YOU CANT EVEN SEE ME!-But know that Im seething
MY SYMPTOMS ARE ONSET!-So save me your nonsense!
Your zombies ramble on!
I'm ******** my soul is gone!
Make no mistake, you're mine!
Don't move and you'll be fine!
(Chorus)
Apeirophobic GOD!
Aichmophobic FRAUD!
Barophobic, Ecophobic, Pantophobic b*****d!
Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobic DEMON!
Myrmecophobic INSECT!
Parthenophobic GODDESS!
Selenophobic MANIC!
Heresyphobic PROPHET!
Gerascophobic MAN!
- by SilvertongueSagittarius |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/19/2010 |
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- Title: Fear
- Artist: SilvertongueSagittarius
- Description: I thought I'd already submitted this. Guess not... w/e. It's an onlder song of mine. Really heavy. Back when I had an obsession with phobias.
- Date: 06/19/2010
- Tags: fear
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Echo Ligeia - 07/03/2010
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word choice ^^
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- Echo Ligeia - 07/03/2010
- Yes, this is really heavy. ^^ I think that this piece could use a tad bit of editing; some typos broke the flow for me (exp: "interprate", "coniving", etc) and some phrases have the potential to be phrased better (exp:"so save me your nonsense" could be "so spare me your nonsense" and "your heart pounds you" is awkwardly phrased). Did you sacrificed meaning for rhyme? Also, the poem switches from first to second person; was this accidental? But, good emotion, and vivid wo
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- I screwed Princess Peach - 06/19/2010
- it's good. like your type of rhyming. it's different than other ones i've seen. 5/5
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