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By dawn a thick fog covers a city of crime,
The sun is blurred in its wake
But even at this unusual time,
One person is quite awake
Though surrounded by the London clatter
His senses turned it away
For clearly something was the matter
From what that note had to say
Not wishing to disturb his companion,
nor wishing to lose his scent,
He dawned a cap, and hunting cloak
and on his way he went.
His friend, awoke, shortly thereafter,
And ate his breakfast alone,
When into the room, with his silent laughter
came the famous Sherlock Holmes
"My dear Watson," the detective began,
"What an interesting morning I've had!"
"Have you gotten another case?" asked the Doctor.
"Indeed," he replied, with no more to add.
Watson did not press the subject,
It was simply Sherlock's way,
a way to which Watson could not object,
to think rather than to say.
Pressing together the tips of his fingers,
and leaning back in his chair,
Smoke from his cherry pipe lingers,
filling the living room air.
- by ChibiGinie |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/30/2010 |
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- Title: Elementary
- Artist: ChibiGinie
- Description: I know it's kind of long, and that the rhyme distribution is a little rough, but I just finished reading the entire collection of Sherlock Holmes stories, and needed to put these ideas somewhere. Constructive criticism, or a mutual love of Mr. Holmes is appreciated. *edit* The rest of the poem is under Elementary II if you want to know how it ends.
- Date: 05/30/2010
- Tags: elementary
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Comments (2 Comments)
- ChibiGinie - 09/13/2010
- I definitely know what you mean, and I would strongly recommend looking at some of my other poetry, as most of it is humorous (if a little morbid razz )
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- Sakuretsu Sky - 07/14/2010
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Holmes! <3
Such a refreshingly pleasant theme, contrary to the rest of this arena: 90% of which is comprised of death/heartbreak. In any case! Wonderful rhymes, and a faithful representation of the characters! - Report As Spam