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There seems to point in trying,
Chenge isn't started by lying.
I look back,I remember It's my fault,
I look the affected and my guilt conquers.
Emptiness intoxicates my happeniss,
Thoughts and looks remind me I'm less.
The world one day will die,
Asfor me...why not give it a try?
They live life at it's fullest,
And they see through my fake smiles.
It's all a challenge,
It's all obstacles.
Some get through,
Others in life weren't trained enough.
So the first thing I do is run,
And whether or not you talk to s friend,
We wish there was an end.
I want my "undo" option
So I sit waiting for the bright lines on the lcd of my life reads'
GAME OVER
- by walkingdead07 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/28/2010 |
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- Title: Giving up
- Artist: walkingdead07
- Description: It's something I came up with when I was dealing through lots of stress
- Date: 05/28/2010
- Tags: giving
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Comments (1 Comments)
- bram toker - 06/04/2010
- This seems to be a mix of free verse and a rhyme scheme, which makes it confusing. However, I still think this was a pretty good piece. I'm glad your stressful period is over now, and that you didn't give up after all.
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