Ode To Love

• Artist: cinnimoroll_yumyum
• Description: I had to write this poem for my LA class, then enter it into a poetry contest. I won't be knowing the results for quite a while. However, I would love to hear your opinions!^^
• Date: 04/30/2010
• Tags: love

Fickle, sweet, and bringing heat to cheeks
love is a thing that is never bleak
A gentle caress, a small shy glance,
love is a thing that comes by chance
Pounding hearts and awkward hellos,
love is a thing that's easy to show
Infatuation and dreamy sighs,
love is a thing that's hard to deny

Love, oh love, so sweet and divine
How much I wish that you were mine!
Though you cut through hearts like a knife,
You are the essence of all life

Coming in all shapes and sizes,
Love is full of great surprises
Though some are full of helpless doubt,
It's only because they're without

Everlasting throughout the years,
Wiping away so many tears
Though it may sound sentimental,
I say love is monumental

Fickle, sweet, and bringing heat to cheeks,
love is a thing that is never bleak
A gentle caress, a small shy glance,
love is a thing that comes by chance
Pounding hearts and awkward hellos,
love is a thing that's easy to show
Infatuation and dreamy sighs,
love is a thing that's hard to deny

Comments

[cinnimoroll_yumyum]

Thank you very much!^^

[Country Rain]

Wow... I love this poem. :] It's all true too. :]

[cinnimoroll_yumyum]

C: aw phank you guuuuyyyysss!^^

[angel_blackfire01]

<3 your brilliance sets me in awe, as always razz

[teleportation]

[: this is LOVELY biggrin and very radical,too.