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Black ashes fall.
Heaven has burned,
If you glare up at the clouds,
The angels look cold.
And at heavens gates, out soldiers fall.
It's all for one, and one for all.
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- Title: Black ashes
- Artist: -Exoticc
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Description:
My Poetry doesn't have certain descriptions. It is just something I do, and love doing.
This is a piece I wrote about heaven. - Date: 04/17/2010
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Comments (2 Comments)
- -Exoticc - 04/17/2010
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Thank you !
I am hoping to write all my poems out in these submissions.
But I am allowed only 2 per day. =[ - Report As Spam
- xninja_turtle - 04/17/2010
- I really like this. It's very... poetic, for lack of a better word. Strong, and passionate.
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