Walking on Water

• Artist: Scarlet_Teardrops
• Description: A Christian poem about conquering your fears and doubts. Please tell me what you think and rate accordingly.
  
  I would ask that you don't judge by your own personal beliefs, but by the work of the poetry and its content. Thank you.
• Date: 04/07/2010
• Tags: christian fears doubts victory

Walking on Water (4-7-10)

Is it possible
To walk on water?
The voices tell me no,
But God seems to think so.

The waters are
Too rough, aren’t they?
The voices tell me so,
But God’s answer is no.

I’ll die if
I try, won’t I?
The voices tell me so,
But God tells me to go.

I step out.
Too late to turn back?
The voices tell me no.
God still tells me to go.

I go…
The voices fade away,
And I take His hand.

Comments

[Homicide at its BEST]

Ah. This poem is creepy! God wanting to take you? Frightening, but lovely.

[SiMpLe_CuTiE_13]

It is a great reminder of how God is always with us ^^
5/5 ♥

[Lucky-Emi]

i like it. nice work. 5/5

[Xiao77]

I think, even if your not a Christian, this can be relateable to anyone, because we all need to remember there is someone out there we can simply just trust. Good work =)

[squeakygirl]

Things in life can be scary, God will give you his hand. Don't question what he asks of you, just take it.