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Can I express the way I feel today,
when grass so green shoot up from all around?
Spring tends to make me feel a certain way,
so I indulge in all its sights and sound.
It's good to feel the sun in all its heat,
but shy away from screams of gust full air.
To feel green grass again beneath my feet,
and then be like a child without a care.
Emerge from death, the world will rise brand new,
and life on earth will gaze upon the stars.
Spring makes grown men stop what they always do,
and try their bikes and stray away from cars.
I live for all the times when birds do sing.
And birds do love the beauty of the spring!
- by 290DarkStars |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/28/2010 |
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- Title: Spring: My feelings
- Artist: 290DarkStars
- Description: Totally wierd. I Hadt odo a 10 sylable-line sonnet in Iambic pentameter. 9PM me if you REALLY want to know wut that is) So I cooked this thing up, and hope you like it ^^ please comment, THEN rate. If you dont have the balls to comment, your not good enough to rate. ^^ jk. xD but whatev. please comment :)
- Date: 03/28/2010
- Tags: spring feelings
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Comments (4 Comments)
- 1so_so11rry_ari11 - 05/21/2010
- awww this made me smile....bravo
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- mystistar115 - 04/14/2010
- wow that is a much better poem then i write
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- Th3 PrInCeEsS - 03/31/2010
- I liked it so much.....You are good writter by all means ^-^ :} 5/5
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- Buttercup Veela - 03/29/2010
- Aww, that was a sweet poem! ♥ I love spring too, but you know what my favorite season is! :] This poem was awesome! 5/5!
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