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She gazed into his eyes,
one last time.
It was the hardest thing she'd ever done.
I love you,
she whispered one last time.
But I have to let you go,
are the words that followed after.
She gathered all her strength,
took a deep breath and turned around.
She looked forward,
not knowing what lay ahead for their future.
If they would be friends or enemies
She walks off,
into the distance.
Leaving the boy she once knew behind.
She gazed into his eyes,
one last time.
It was the hardest thing she'd ever done.
Goodbye.
- by EmoKisses-x |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/02/2010 |
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- Title: Goodbye
- Artist: EmoKisses-x
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Description:
Something I came up with,
again,something else that took a short amount of time.
The quote
"She gazed into his eyes one last time"
came to my mind,and I wanted to make a poem about it.
Basically about a girl breaking up with her love,
she didnt really want to,but knew she had to,
even if she was unsure of what would happen to them next.
Comment & Rate Please :]
<3 - Date: 03/02/2010
- Tags: goodbye love breakup
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Comments (5 Comments)
- EmoKisses-x - 03/06/2010
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Thanks for the feedback(:
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- iQueen Diana The 10th - 03/06/2010
- very nice.. like the way you wrote it! yes like a letter but poems can take many forms and i love it! hehe ;3
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- xHxExLxExNx - 03/04/2010
- just happened luv the peom 5/5
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- thefartingspider - 03/02/2010
- This isn;t really a poem..it's more of a letter...fiction. However that being said it was very well thought out. Very sad, it draws the reader's attention, many people can symothize with the feeling of loss. You used alot of comon metaphors, like leting someone go...try making your own descriptions. Then you can really draw attention. Overal...4/5
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- crying hoplessness12 - 03/02/2010
- omg this like soo happend to me!
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