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To die free
Is the greatest gift of all
For a man,
A woman, a child
Freedom is the
Air they breathe
The water they drink
The life they want to live
To die enslaved
Is horrid and repulsive
Be free in mind and soul
And you shall be free
For eternety!
- by XD Kyuubin XD |
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- | Submitted on 02/26/2010 |
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- Title: Freedom
- Artist: XD Kyuubin XD
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Description:
Another random poem by me written in school....This is probably one of my last poems i might make more...I'm not sure yet...^.^
This is pretty old but I didn't get to put it on yet!
Hope you enjoy!
Plz rate and comment!!! Ciao - Date: 02/26/2010
- Tags: freedom
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Siefen - 06/17/2010
- XDDD 5/5
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- Chamomile Dream - 05/16/2010
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This is wonderful! I only have two very minor criticisms;
A) You spelt 'water' wrong, and
B) 'Horrid' is not a particularly emotive word, you could have used something a little more emotional.
But still, this is a beautiful poem, five stars! - Report As Spam
- XD Kyuubin XD - 02/26/2010
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Guess after or during what subject I thought of this!
Eh? Lol ^.^ - Report As Spam
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