Anxiety

• Artist: neomenia
• Description: I have generalized anxiety disorder, so I kinda wrote this about myself.
• Date: 02/23/2010
• Tags: anxiety

She has them fooled
They think she’s strong
Keeps pushing on

But they don’t know
How she sits and cries
All alone at night

They don’t know
The pain she feels
How she wants to die

She wishes she was strong
That she could let go of the pain
But every single night
The anxiety wraps her up so tight

She wakes up every morning
Wanting to rip out her guts
They don’t know she feels crazy
That they are the reason
For all her pain

She takes the pills
She does the work
But no matter how hard she tries
The creeping monster
Won’t let go its grip

She still has them fooled
They watch her and wonder
What it is she ponders

How can she be so strong?
She never lets on
She never lets on

Comments

[thefartingspider]

very good...depressing..dark...mystierious...yet oddly familiar. I wasn;t particularly fond of th4e way you grouped things in the begining though. Also you used alot of cliches. and your wording could use a little work. When writing in free form, don't be afraid to pull out some big words. Overall...4/5