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Wasted hope and wasted life
Failed again my kids and wife
"Not my fault" I may cry
- the echoes know better, and so do I.
Every time, I always hope
until I'm given enough rope,
and then I hang around and sigh
- the rope knew better, and so did I.
I've still not learned to hold back;
my hopes still outrace the track.
Those in the bleachers wonder why
- they knew better and so should I.
I waste my hope on things
like jobs, books, and diamond rings.
My hopes burst free, and off they fly
- though they know better, and so should I.
Blind and foolish, I'll stumble on
until the world is burned and gone,
but still be hoping for another try
- the World knew better, why not I?
- by nbetweener |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/23/2010 |
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- Title: The Fool's Tale
- Artist: nbetweener
- Description: Nice cheerful poem...not. Not sure if I like the title...trying a new one.
- Date: 02/23/2010
- Tags: they knew better hope
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Sunset Eyre - 03/06/2010
- This was very sentimental and I enjoyed it, it started pretty strong, and became very sad. Over all, pretty good, and I also agree, title is a little bad.
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- Jokerpaul135 - 02/26/2010
- Yeah I agree the title could be better. You started off strong but then lost it around halfway through. The overall idea was good though. =)
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