A Dark Place

• Artist: trshakespeare
• Description:
• Date: 02/16/2010
• Tags: dark place

In this dark and dreary place,
Hearts wallow in deep sorrow,

In this dark and dreary place,
Hearts hang on the brink,

In this dark and dreary place,
What one once had is no more,

In this dark and dreary place,
A piece of us disappears,

In this dark and dreary place,
No hope in the darkness,

In this dark and dreary place,
Love falls away,

In this dark and dreary place,
All ends, all dies, all are in pain,

In this dark and dreary place.

Comments

[nbetweener]

The repetition really doesn't help the piece. And must you be so blasted cheerful?
i like the line "A piece of us disappears", though. Best line in the whole thing.