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As the rain pity, patters, away
Laying down to rest staring off into space
Blinking to see the world before me
As I look more seeing the world shatter
Watching it slowly fall and die
As I wake rising from the lie
Seeing all the plans laid out
Slowly following the paths walking and swaying
All the faces turning into deadly lies
Running from the fears deep inside
End up running into death itself
Feeling the hands grip the life
Now I see myself or is it?
Now I know my soul is gone
Devoured by death himself...
- by xXwolfyhybridXx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/09/2010 |
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- Title: Devouring the Soul
- Artist: xXwolfyhybridXx
- Description: This is just a random "poem" I made in class. I know it probably seems nothing like a poem but hey nobody is perfect. Hope you like it and hope I get lots of comments and votes! ^.^ Oh and if anyone has any recommendations let me know, cause I want to hear how I can improve my work, no nasty comments or I will delete your comment.
- Date: 02/09/2010
- Tags: devouring soul gothic
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Comments (2 Comments)
- queen siva - 04/12/2010
- lovely 4/5.....keep it up
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- lxl_Tatsuya_lxl - 02/09/2010
- i really liked it, except i was a bit confused, the usage of words kind of weird and doesn't totally make sense, but good job otherwise
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