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Love is like a flower.
Sometimes-
It blooms.
Yet sometimes-
It dies.
By the cold,
Cruel,
Hand of fate.
A bud,
That has yet to bloom.
- by xX_RaWr i iz TiGeR_Xx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/05/2010 |
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- Title: Love
- Artist: xX_RaWr i iz TiGeR_Xx
- Description: What love is all about..
- Date: 02/05/2010
- Tags: love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Sue_Chan1994 - 02/19/2010
- i love this, im actually a poet as well XD. but this is very beautiful and true. 4/5 stars =]
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- xX_RaWr i iz TiGeR_Xx - 02/06/2010
- i wouldnt get mad, i use critisism to make my art better. Thank you for commenting and voting!
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- Ammiel Azarel - 02/05/2010
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Nice start but it feels incomplete. Your poem without you was better and that one got a low rating.
I want to give this poem a 3/5 but will give it a 4/5 because I dont want you to get mad and retaliate by giving one of my poems a 3 or worse.
I rated someone down before and that person gave me a 3 when I had a perfect streak of 5/5. He was just pissed and didn't even read my poem.
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