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An Abstract Poem
Pure, calm, innocents,
Like the leaves before a storm,
Dancing in the Wind.
Dark, evil things come,
To take and ruin our life,
Faster, the leaves dance.
The clouds cry for us,
And kills us at the same time.
They sob for our crimes.
Tears won’t change our lives,
We’ll keep up our evil games,
Killing everything.
The beast in out hearts,
We struggle to control it,
Dying to be free.
Young and innocent,
Raised to be proper people,
Now in Slavery.
You now come to the
Conclusion that this is real,
That all love is dead.
On Good And Evil
- by SinOfInsanity |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/01/2010 |
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- Title: On Good and Evil
- Artist: SinOfInsanity
- Description: a poem written in haikus, or it should be, i guess it depends on how you say things, i hope you like it though, its just a first draft though, not the final
- Date: 02/01/2010
- Tags: good evil
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Comments (3 Comments)
- SinOfInsanity - 04/01/2010
- i have to really really thank you two. those comments really boost confidence ^^
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- Poetic Progression - 02/24/2010
- Strong imagery, and I like the format.
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- Stuffed_Walrus - 02/12/2010
- Well done. The use of imagery is very good.
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