Marine

• Artist: kia1996
• Description: my first real poem
  its about a person who wants to become a marine and is trying to talk his father into leting him.
  again, its my first real poem, so sorry if it sucks.
  plz comment on wut u liked or disliked.
• Date: 01/26/2010
• Tags: marine

Father, I want to be a Marine.

I want to be the first in,
and the last out,

of this, at least, I have no doubt.
I really want to help my country out!

I know your desires,
you are afraid of finding me dead, tangled in the barbed wire.

Or finding on the ground alone, dead,
with a bullet through my head.

Father, I know the dangers,
but at least I'm not joining the ARMY RANGERS!

Father, please,
I know at least this without a doubt.

I truly want to be the first in,
and the last out.

Comments

[kia1996]

shank you very much XD

[Razzrules]

I read it xD -Gets 10 points-

[tj ghost]

da poem is good and i'll leavE it at dat