Beaten by the People I Love

• Artist: Bari Amaryllis
• Description: I'm not sure about it, but you may think it's a gem... Mainly looking for feedback. Please and Thank you!
  It's mainly about how I don't give a s--- about myself and the only thing that will ever hurt me (and man, it does hurt) is not being able to help others.
• Date: 01/14/2010
• Tags: beaten people love

Every soul in my life is being hurt,
Striking me in every part of my core.
Somehow, somewhere, no breaks.
I love everyone here,
For them, I'd eternally sleep.
Every moment of their pain is a lash at my heart.
To my knees I fall, only to be hit again.
I bleed my love for them,
I try to help them, dispite the very torture;
But I'm at a loss.
I only make things worse when my love is being beaten out of me.

Comments

[Erkengalsh]

It sounds like you were an Emo kid at one point in time. Who was it that hurt your heart so?