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Bad three-line poem:
Syllable count is all wrong.
Learn to write Haiku.
- by Dalen_Talas |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/11/2010 |
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- Title: Critique
- Artist: Dalen_Talas
- Description: Left as a comment one some lyrics here.
- Date: 01/11/2010
- Tags: critique haiku japanese japan
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