moms death

• Artist: elflakoo155
• Description: i wrote this poem on my moms death........the death of a loved one will always be in the lovers memory
• Date: 01/09/2010
• Tags: moms death

I sit beside you, Mom
On deaths doorstep you lay
I set my head upon your wrist
As I bow my head to pray

The world to me shut off
The silence here is thick
Alone just you and I
And your watchs rhythmic tick

I block out all my pain
And loss Im sure to feel
I concentrate now deeply
On the tick your watch reveals

I sit here now for days
And hear the rhythmic sound
I contemplate you being gone
The thought now seems profound

The time for you is near
To enter Heavens Gate
ll stay here by your side
Until your journey is complete

Its months now since youve passed
My wounds are healing slow
I want so much to hear your voice
To see your smiles glow

I lay my head upon my wrist
When my feelings are too strong
I hear your watchs rhythmic tick
And know youre never gone

Comments

[Anthony Fantano]

your missing a apostrophe. 3rd stanza down second line. Also, you spelled "I'll" wrong on the 5th stanza and 3rd line.
Sorry to hear about your mom, I know how tough it is to loose a loved one.

[Gothique Jedi]

This is amazing. 5/5