who to choose

• Artist: nightmare mew
• Description: im confused so uterly confused i lyk my frend...bt idk if he likes me back...and i love my boy friend so much...but hes not around much...my frend is alot....can any one give me advise....oh and the poems crappy sorry im nearly in tears
• Date: 12/30/2009
• Tags: choose

i see you my love
my true i love you
as we walk through the streets
he is there
my friend...my crush...
falling for you was easy
falling for him was clumsy
you both stand in front of me smileing
first his smile fades seeing you
then yours does to
i understand what you both mean...
whom do i choose....
i hardly see you but when i do its...
magical
i always see him and each time
the butterflys come
god whom do i pick...i want you both.....
does he even like me?i know you do....
should i risk a friend ship for a love....
should i stay with you?

Comments

[mirachan3]

Highly personal wish I could give advice but i don't know the entire situation. You can pm if you like. But the poem needs more, something to add make it more known what your conveying. But all in all i liked it. 4/5

[urDARKdeath]

damn mew inlove agian......your poem doesnt really make sence to me.....but i understand how you feel....rewrite it telling how you feel not your setting dear sister