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Numb
No feeling, no emotion
Pain
Undiscribable pain, inside and out
Cold
Colder every second
Scream
Deafning, but yet silent, it comes from my insides
Alone
No one can hear it, because no ones around
Dead
Too much, going, going, gone, forever
- by ladykurdle |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/27/2009 |
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- Title: My Insides Scream Out: HELP!
- Artist: ladykurdle
- Description: What does this poem mean, can you think of what might have caused this person to feel like this?
- Date: 12/27/2009
- Tags: insides scream help
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Comments (3 Comments)
- MalevolentChocolate - 01/23/2010
- s**t, man! Just trying to help. And my "thick head" just so happens to have won over 14 poetry contests and 9 writing contests! So stick that up where the sun don't shine!
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- ladykurdle - 01/09/2010
- Poems can be anything, they dont have to be a certain way. Poems are more for just sharing how they feel or what they see, thats all that really matters to me. so you can go ahead and write "perfect" cruddy, shallow poems, and let me stick to my way. got that? or do i have to put it in a certain format before it can get inside your thick head?
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- MalevolentChocolate - 12/27/2009
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Umm... is this a poem? It sounded more like a description of what someone was feeling, just split up into six categories. It might help if you described a bit more what was happening, and put it into poem format... sort of like this:
"No feeling, No emotion.
I feel
undescribable pain,
inside
and out..."
That's a bit broken, kind of freestyle poetry. - Report As Spam
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