My Insides Scream Out: HELP!

• Artist: ladykurdle
• Description: What does this poem mean, can you think of what might have caused this person to feel like this?
• Date: 12/27/2009
• Tags: insides scream help

Numb

No feeling, no emotion

Pain

Undiscribable pain, inside and out

Cold

Colder every second

Scream

Deafning, but yet silent, it comes from my insides

Alone

No one can hear it, because no ones around

Dead

Too much, going, going, gone, forever

Comments

[MalevolentChocolate]

s**t, man! Just trying to help. And my "thick head" just so happens to have won over 14 poetry contests and 9 writing contests! So stick that up where the sun don't shine!

[ladykurdle]

Poems can be anything, they dont have to be a certain way. Poems are more for just sharing how they feel or what they see, thats all that really matters to me. so you can go ahead and write "perfect" cruddy, shallow poems, and let me stick to my way. got that? or do i have to put it in a certain format before it can get inside your thick head?

[MalevolentChocolate]

Umm... is this a poem? It sounded more like a description of what someone was feeling, just split up into six categories. It might help if you described a bit more what was happening, and put it into poem format... sort of like this:

"No feeling, No emotion.
I feel
undescribable pain,
inside
and out..."

That's a bit broken, kind of freestyle poetry.