On Top

• Artist: 11Josie11
• Description: Haven't you ever wondered how it would feel?
• Date: 12/23/2009
• Tags: cliff

On top of a cliff
That's on top of the sea
That's on top of the core of the world
Is me
And it won't be long now
Until I am free
And gone from the cliff
That's on top of the sea

Comments

[TheUnForgivenChild]

Wondered how what would feel? To jump from a cliff and die? Thats my first impression of your poem and discription. I have actually wondered that many times.
the poems short but it still has nice imagery. ~good.