The World

• Artist: GrumpehKitten
• Description: This is a sonnet written in English style, more often referred to as Shakespearean style. It is in iambic pentameter and whatnot. It is without a doubt, the essence of my relationship with my boyfriend.
  
  I hope you like it!
• Date: 11/30/2009
• Tags: world

To He who makes my world turn round and round,
why have you left me lying in the cold?
Tis you who kept my soul above the ground,
And you who made my young love feel so old.
Should I compare you to a long cold night.
whose fading life turns into sun's sweet rays?
You shine on me in life with all your might,
And it will shine and last through all my days.
But when you leave me here what shall I do?
We loved, I lost, you left, oh dear, alack.
After you left instead my love, it grew.
My Love I swear I wish you would come back.
xxxxx]My Dear I see your face in all I do.
xxxxx]But will I ever mean the world to you?

Comments

[GrumpehKitten]

Thank you!

[xXxLiL_SHoRTiixXx]

that was BEAUTIFUL!!!!i wish you and your boyfriend the GREATEST luck!!5/5

[lxl_Tatsuya_lxl]

i like it, i personally don't like writing sonnets cuz of the strict rules, but i think u did a really good job on it