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There once were five girls,
Each had a story to be told,
And they each learned how it truly feels to love..
One.
She was a sweet girl,
or so everyone thought.
She fell in love ,
and believed he was the one,
and he promised her everything,
and that he'd always be hers,
as long as she did one thing,
which was to give herself up.
Two.
She was a very lonely girl,
who never had any actual friends,
she met the boy of her dreams,
he was too perfect for words.
he took her hand to be engaged,
and so that year went on,
he loved her so,
as she did him,
but he suddenly moved on.
Three.
She was never beautiful,
or so herself she thought,
when she got near a boy,
her stomach felt as though it tied into knots.
he was her friend,
she was so scared,
but she asked him anyway,
he said "of course",
but in the end,
he had to go away.
Four.
She was so strong,
she believed in herself,
she had such confidence,
she went to him,
and asked him out,
and he said "sure i guess.",
she pushed herself on him,
and tried so hard to please,
but in the end,
he no longer loved her,
and she begged to him on her knees.
Five.
She was so silent,
she was too shy,
it was as though she was invisible.
he came to her,
she blushed real hard,
and told her that he liked her.
he gave her confidence,
she became an individual,
he was a big part of her life,
but then one day,
something went wrong,
and this girl could have died.
Now you may think,
they went on with life sad,
or tragic for that matter.
but do not fret my dear,
I've learned my lesson,
I know its very hard.
There are so many types of love.
As told here,
but rather than just five girls,
it was me all along.
- by S Q U I G E L Y |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/29/2009 |
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- Title: Painful Affection.
- Artist: S Q U I G E L Y
- Description: this poem is about past relationships. please comment.
- Date: 11/29/2009
- Tags: painful affection
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Sissygoogle - 12/17/2009
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Though I'm not too much of a poet, I'd just like to say that you had an interesting twist in the last stanza. I guess the entire thing was sort of sobering, but that was the point, I surmise?
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- nejirocklee - 12/03/2009
- nice though the context need to be more deeper
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- xXGhostx - 11/29/2009
- Nice surprise in the end. The conclusion was very touching as well.
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