Hope for the Forbidden

• Artist: maydaymouse
• Description: I don't really know where this particular poem came from, but it just came out. But, I hope you people like it, and your comments and ratings would be much appreciated, than you!
• Date: 11/25/2009
• Tags: hope forbidden

A demon dreaming
Of his sweet angel's singing
Never wanting to awaken
From his divine haven
His closed eyes held tight the dark
Behind his mind, hidden in his heart
His angel was fading, screams were swallowed
No light shining, nothing to be followed
Sinful wings, once pure white
Fleeing to his dark, shunning her light
Gradually she fell, from Heaven above
To a place unspoken, for their forbidden love

Comments

[magic_doglover]

i rather like this one. short and sweet, and tells a compelling little story.

[ellohell0]

beautiful poem mo chara

[Ultima011]

Amazing poem. I can't believe that I'm the fourth commit for it. 5/5

[kage kokoro 10]

pretty ;D keep at it, btw thx for rateing mine ^^ 5/5

[DollyCarter]

Im really suprised there hasn't been alot of comments on this. It's truly amazing! Thanks for rating and commenting my poem by the way smile

[XxDireFangxX]

im surprised im the first to comment on this one but its awsome none the less 5/5