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And just for you
A little oak tree towering of me,
looks at the daydreames going inside my head.
The feelings of love tears me apart,
as my last minute with her rips to shreds.
And just for you,
my darling, a little bit bitter sweet love,
for you my darling,
just say that you know me enough to say that
You love me.
As the day passes on,
and the sun falls into the water,
my heart drains,
of something I once knew,
of my love,
That was just for you.
- by critic-the-homeless |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/12/2009 |
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- Title: And Just For You
- Artist: critic-the-homeless
- Description: This is a poem that sprouted into my head. I put it in the monthly contest in one of the guilds I joined. So iw as going to see how it went, and then I posted it here. Comment and rate plz!!! ^.^
- Date: 11/12/2009
- Tags: just
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Comments (2 Comments)
- critic-the-homeless - 11/21/2009
- im surprised that people didnt like it. I thought it was one of my best ones I have done.
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- TeKNo fAcTioN - 11/14/2009
- I LOVED THIS!!! you chould elaborate on it more!!
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