unnoticeable

• Artist: Cameron Morgan
• Description: confusing, but if you know poems you can figure it out
• Date: 10/29/2009
• Tags: unnoticeable

i am darkness
but people use me for light
i breath air
but water is my home
i love music
but i cannot hear
i love rainbows
but cannot see
i love
but people call me cruel
i am misjudged,
mistaken
i am life...
and all that's n it

Comments

[Tino x World Boss]

I got the consept. Keep trying though, grammer needs to be better. Make sure you re-read before you post. Nicely done. It's almost cheesy, kind of kid-like to me because i thought at first you were trying to talk about yourself not being able to hear, see etc. But then i got it. And a lot of poems end with explanation. And thats fine. Well, anyhow keep trying fix your grammer! I hope you didnt get offended ---.----"