Onamatopoeia

• Artist: Fabulously Lucius
• Description: This is a jazz poem I wrote for An Evening in the Arts and it needs some work. Please give me some suggestions ofr the poem and also for the choreography for the dancers to help interpret this.
• Date: 10/27/2009
• Tags: onamatopoeia

I hear music when I walk outside my door,
And the clang clang of construction keeps time to my step;
The boom of thunder leers in my ears,
And the crackle of leaves in the wind;
The pitter-patter of rain on the cement,
And the woosh of air against me;
The caw caw of the crow on the street,
And the crunch of gravel at my feet;
The thump thump of my heart beating,
And the knock of a neighbor at a door;
The plink of water from the drain pipe,
And the plonk as it hits the ground;
The slam of hammers to the house,
And the buzz of saws add to the mix,
While the stomp of my feet finish the orchestra.
But the music never ends.
I hear music. Can you?