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I can't grasp the doorway
its going too far
they told me to stay
but i had to move on
this world is so perfect
exept for what i....
cannot touch, grasp
or see with my eyes
those people who see things
i think them so great
so lucky, so worthy
while i'm always late
My powers are in there
i feel them so strong
i wisper inside me,
"Just come along"
They seem to be coming
then sink way back down
as i gaze to the stars
from the top of the town
My rooftop is low
so maybe i need to get high
I take out a knife
and plunge it to my heart
i lift to the heavens
The powers come up
I float in the mist
and i feel so alive
then i realize......
i am dead
i am great
i can see what i want
but it burns to use powers
maybe cause i'm dead
- Title: Powers Up High
- Artist: Zenyei
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Description:
-_- none of this actually happened but i did hear a story kinda like this once.
PLEASE PLEASE COMENT AND VOTE WELL :D - Date: 10/18/2009
- Tags: powers high
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Danna Amamus - 10/27/2009
- For the 3-5th stanzas you have a great AC rhyme scheme - try to challenge yourself and make the first two stanzas rhyme as well. I DO like that the rhyming stops after the narrator dies - that seems rather fitting. Good job!
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